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Leffel McCurdy's avatar

I love this. It reminds me of a sort of inversion from my childhood- playing in houses that were under construction. They didn’t bother to put up fences around construction sites in those days, and we were free to gather up stray nails and run up and down naked stair cases. The wood had a wonderful, fresh pine smell, and would weep sap that was clear as a jewel and sticky….

Agree with everyone on the twist at the end of your story. Can’t help but think of his poor head.

Chuck Roemer's avatar

vivid! My school years were much less eventful

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